jornales

for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

abducted fireflies (haiga7 for 19 Planets Art Blog)

haiga7 for haiga-a-day made with clip art on Microsoft Publisher

abducted fireflies
glowing in its eyes
frog

Another post for Rick Daddario’s haiga-a-day challenge at 19 Planets Art Blog, which I created from a clip art on Microsoft Publisher.

And what’s behind the image of the frog? This…

Noticing what could be unseen or merely imagined, magnifying the significance of what would be otherwise, some speck lost in the swarm of air particulates, this is what poetry, especially haiku, does to me. My mind cannot seem to work within limitations of space and time, or even sensations. What’s beyond a simple object in a single moment becomes a truth that breaks through thought barriers. Take the frog.

Basho has immortalized its break out of anonymity with his famous haiku, ‘old pond’. Reading it again and again, one steps into the monastic peace of an old pond until a frog that one hardly notices among stones, plops, and animates the peace with the sound of water. In a moment, the old pond turns into a universal moment of any moment that once was lifeless, suddenly, breathing from the unexpected.

My haiga is hardly a takeoff from Basho’s frog. It does not have the quietness of it, nor of the objective quality that identifies the poet as the observer but in whose mind, reality is arranged into three lines that total into a truth. While an observation as well, mine is less objective in that I state what I suppose in what I see, namely, the glow in a frog’s eye–seen especially in the dark. Knowing what it feeds on, I imagine fireflies and connect it with that glow. In reality, it is far-fetched as we know that anything creatures eat ends up far from the eyes, in the stomach. If a glow ever shows in the eye, it is that of satisfaction. But what I have done here, or think so, anyway, is tweak reality and made it slide into poetic thought, some other truth.

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September 16, 2011 - Posted by | comment, haiga, haiku, poetry, reflection | , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

4 Comments »

  1. aloha Alegria – i like your statement: “magnifying the significance of… the unseen” – poetry. i also like the way you’ve organized the haiga. great choice of image for the haiku as well. each time i read the haiku it swells up a little more in meaning and moment – i like that. ways cool. aloha.

    Comment by Rick Daddario | September 19, 2011 | Reply

    • Thanks again, Rick! Look at what your encouraging words has been doing to my haiga-ing. I can’t wait to see where I’m going with this….

      Comment by Alegria Imperial | September 19, 2011 | Reply

      • bwahahahaha – aloha Alegria – i’m looking forward to where your haiga-ing journey takes you – one step each work. i particularly find the excitement you feel in what you are doing to be contagious. yeah, i like that too. aloha.

        Comment by Rick Daddario | September 19, 2011

  2. […] Jornales – Abducted Fireflies – Alegria Imperial […]

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