jornales

for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

“angelus bells” and “being there”: finding a treasure

 

I’ve been browsing through my files and found this treasure that I have forgotten, buried as it is in my daily-writing years. I’ve slowed down a bit, especially on haiku, feeling like I’m skidding into a meltdown. I seem more productive with my mainstream/innovative/contemporary poems more accepted by only a couple of editors these days. But I’m amazed no end when I find my old works especially when it has been picked up and reviewed as Kathy Uyen Nguyen did to my haiku and haibun at her blog Origami Lotus Stone seven years ago. And my heart sinks…Thank you again, so much Kathy!

Wednesday, August 22, 2012

August Blog Bash, Day 22 – Alegria Imperial @gwhisp

Welcome to the Debut of the August Blog Bash 2012!

I am very much excited and honored to be hosting this new feature series… and it is a great way to end the summer!  This Blog Bash is an impressive talent showcase of poets, artists, and writers/authors from all walks of life.  For each day of this month, one individual will be featured here on this blog, at Origami Lotus Stones, my Twitter (hashtag will be #augblogbash), my Facebook community page, and on my blog page on Writing Our Way Home.  Please be patient while I post on all platforms.

**Please note that all authors/artists have given me permission to post their work on the following platforms/sites I have just mentioned.  Please do not plagiarize, modify, reproduce, or distribute any work without permission from the original authors/artists.  Thank you!** If you are interested in participating in this Blog Bash, feel free to check out the details here.
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Today’s Feature:  Alegria Imperial angelusbells by AI
This gorgeous haiku presents a new perspective of church bells tolling with words in minimalistic form.  Through this haiku, the reader can feel the heartbeat of every bell toll as well as his/her own heart beating along with the bells themselves.  I also love the fact that this haiku leaves a subtle touch of the “just enough” sensation for the reader to put his/her imagination into the haiku itself.  For instance, perhaps it’s a pair of newlyweds who’s just swapped vows.  However, notice that these are “angelus bells.”  Imperial was very precise with this choice of words.  It denotes something worthy of praise–like an angelic praise that is continuous and prolonged (“pealing”), which really does turn one’s pulse up a notch!  I also like the word play here too.  “Pealing” should not be confused with “peeling.”  If the angelus bells are “peeling / in heartbeats,” I would be perhaps thinking about peeling off flower petals such as bell flowers or bleeding hearts (and maybe sticking a flower behind my ear), which would make a wonderful transition between bells and flowers!
beingthere by AI
I am very excited to say that this is the first haibun presented through this August Blog Bash series!  This haibun presents a powerful experience of just simply paying attention to what’s around you and just “being there” in the moment.  There are so many lovely words and phrases here such as “the way the leaves sway and retract” and “the constancy of flowers.”  The stream-of-consciousness style in this haibun is steady and soothing like the river itself.  The delightful thing is that you realize that everything ends in the river when the haibun ended with a “river” haiku.  Both prose and haiku complement one another well.  I love how the prose ended with a floating “when,” which leads cleverly into “shifting tides” (wonderful syntax here), so that there seem to be no break (in the flow) between prose or haiku, even though visually, the reader can see the prose and the haiku separately on the page.  This haibun is very lyrical and meditative in composition and tone. Gorgeous work, Alegria!  Thank you so much for sharing and being one of the contributors!  And many, many thanks for your patience and understanding with what I’m going through now. (NB:  Text arrangement on MS PowerPoint by Kathy Uyen Nguyen.  Please note that text/graphics will be in this format.)

To check out more of Alegria’s work, you can click on the following link(s): Jornales (blog) Filipineses (blog) @gwhisp(Twitter) Please do promote this new feature on Facebook, Twitter, etc.!  Thanks so much for all the support!  And look, my blog now has buttons (see below) to make your life easier!  Come back tomorrow for a new artist/author feature!

 

being there

…it is the rhythm that’s constant it seems and not the stillness—the way the wind pulls and withdraws and the way the leaves sway and retract or how the clouds gather into masses and then dissipate into air or is it merely the eye that misses the jagged movements and edges and catches merely that moment when the rhythm shows and reassures us as in the constancy of flowers even as petals begin to brown and curl in the edges and fall, stripping the branches of their name because all we recall is their being there as in moments we have flowed into still flow into like on our early morning walks when

shifting tides–

the river unloading burdens

for us to decode

 

LYNX XXVII:I February 2012

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ku at Under the Basho

astray

the pond

I lied to

 

magpie chapter

you can tell whose ‘I’

is ripped

 

let it be

if a mollusk’s pulse

corresponds to a fugue

 

the word “seed”

lodged between

my incisors

 

Under the Basho ku, 2019

UtB-ku 2019 https://underthebasho.com/utb-2019/ku/2633-alegria-imperial.html

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summer dusk

summer dusk

a dog sniffs

an empty chair

 

Selected by Dhugal J. Lindsay

The Mainichi, Japan’s National Daily, July 2, 2019

 

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inside out (a sequence)

muffled wildness a winnowing sky

coughing out the sphere rogue wind

ashen dust between fingers palm ribs

outlines against the rain bones inside out

eggshell stillness un-swept sun-shreds

conical jaws vs marbles in a skull graveyard issues

empty eyes glued to a rootless ‘O’

dangling words noone follows swollen whiteness

Bones 17 July 15, 2019 (journal of contemporary haiku)

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single haiku (not proficient, the song I used to hear, the train creeps away)

not proficient 

with birdsong 

a plane arriving

 

the song I used to hear

swish-swash 

of a bamboo broom

 

the train creeps away

the hours emptying 

the houses

 

bones 17, July 15, 2019 (journal of contemporary haiku)

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LOGOS AND ANIMUS INTERPRETED

 

if eye-to-eye with a salamander

 

talk Heidegger or

 

drop down flat on your belly

 

hiss if you can

wait for existential footnotes

be sure to tiptoe

 

what if a rat

spews out philosophy

 

like the state of consciousness

in a walnut

 

the brain you ask

 

frog guffaws a croak

in fact, a song

 

confusing reality with logos

frog’s right in that

 

easier to breathe out pretense

 

than tug your tie clear your throat

of animus

 

and begin on a ribbibit

 

otata July 2019

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Five of my choicest published/awarded haiku

 

rooting in the sky

a palm tree’s

improbability

 

counting star-bones, an e-chapbook, July 2018

https://yavanikapress.wixsite.com/home/our-titles

https://www.thehaikufoundation.org/omeka/items/show/5607

http://www.bonesjournal.com/no15/bones15.pdf

 

 

fountain plume

on the boy’s tongue

a rainbow

 

Mayfly issue 64, 2018

http://www.brooksbookshaiku.com/mayfly.html

 

autumn rain

the river carries

the sky

 

2ndPlace

European Quarterly Kukai, autumn 2017

http://europeankukai.blogspot.com

 

waiting for snow . . . 

his side of the bench

empty

 

The Jade Pond Collection: Sun Yat Sen Gardens Anthology

Vancouver Haiku Group, November 27, 2017

https://www.amazon.ca/Jade-Pond-Inspired-Yat-Sen-Classical/dp/1775112802

 

part grit part fluff the foaming universe

 

otata April 2017

https://otatablog.wordpress.com/2017/04/

 

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five one-line haiku at Under the Basho

Just too excited to share my one-line haiku just up at UTB today and because it’s been sometime since I’ve submitted/accepted at UTB. Thanks again, Johannes

UtB 2018

my eyes on foliage-d sky withering at zenith

river-crossing a breeze wipes off my fate line

mom’s nestled cheek in a boy’s breast my lover’s roost

a fissured boulder at sunset could be me

night’s gritty breath a sky I can’t find

https://underthebasho.com/…/one…/2439-imperial,-alegria.html

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driftwood

driftwood

the strange scent

of sunrise

the daily haiku October 20, 2012 (archived)

 

Please click on the link to see the page

http://www.dailyhaiku.org/haiku/2012-october-20?fbclid=IwAR07GluUeKgZyz26B4WZTG9Q2xTKewIAhU5uXFgCOoKk7uuR3jL9moklLmk

 

 

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had I… (riddles) a versified haibun

…muscle to smash a coughing wall causing an orange mushroom swarm having failed with sneaker waves mapped out for dunce-capped heads

…tears to un-salt with laughter a tale of eaten tail

what feverish strings cicadas improvise…had I the brain to configure as blistered clouds sweep traces of blue in the shallows

I stand split-legged on mountain crags…were I a zenith sun etching furrows
on lips what spills off unconcerned moons

the mourning

dove’s alphabet

echoing mine

otata aug. 2018

 

 

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