for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

dreamscape and other haiku on space at NaHaiWriMo

shooting star–
wish I didn’t know
who you are

where the sun turns away
and the moon rises

vow before it’s broken

(not with NaHaiWriMo)

a breath cirrocumulus
leave for the moon

in the dark
streak of light behind windows–
someone waiting?


June 28, 2011 Posted by | haiku, poetry | , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , | 2 Comments

mist/deepwinter/thunder in the copse–v-day haiku but no ‘heart’ as kigo (for One Stop Poetry, also my 13th,14th,15th NaHaiWriMo)

too wet on cheeks
to be a kiss

deep winter—
bundled up we search
for each other’s eyes

thunder in the copse
a vow

‘Heart’ as kigo is missing here but it’s hinted at. Does Valentine belong to Japanese haiku tradition? I believe it’s not though I don’t really know much about modern Japanese haiku. Perhaps, it has included it as a kigo. Here’s what I think comes closest to it–the courtly tanka in its purest form like this tanka from Thomas Gurgal’s Japanese Tanka, The Court Poetry of a Golden Age, first posted here under grey relentless rain (is it tanka? 02/07 2011) ‘I am comforted’ page 41:

I am comforted;
Now wordly impermanence
Seems unimportant;
Seen in the depths of your eyes,
The warm eternal darkness.

Posted also for One Stop Poetry’s Saturday Celebration of Valentine’s Day. Check us out!

February 12, 2011 Posted by | haiku, poetry | , , , , , , , , , , , , , , | 4 Comments