jornales

for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

caked mud (my haiku for CKK#28)

caked mud
clinging to my heels–
summer memories

Caribbean Kigo Kukai#28 (mud)
Votes:33**** Points: 12
Comments: 255 = 12, Is this person a farmer, a labor worker, or a hiker–nice ambiguities that allow the reader to speculate.

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September 26, 2011 - Posted by | haiku, poetry | , , , , , , , , , , , ,

4 Comments »

  1. Lovely! A true haiku.

    Sorta off handed….

    Lady Nyo

    Comment by ladynyo | October 11, 2011 | Reply

    • Thanks, LadyNyo! It’s an honor your visit and comment!

      Comment by alee9 | October 12, 2011 | Reply

  2. Very great all the best

    Comment by rostumetru | October 16, 2011 | Reply

    • Thanks!

      Comment by alee9 | October 16, 2011 | Reply


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