jornales

for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

dreamscape and other haiku on space at NaHaiWriMo

shooting star–
wish I didn’t know
who you are

dreamscape–
where the sun turns away
and the moon rises

infinity–
vow before it’s broken

(not with NaHaiWriMo)

sky–
a breath cirrocumulus
leave for the moon

in the dark
streak of light behind windows–
someone waiting?

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June 28, 2011 - Posted by | haiku, poetry | , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

2 Comments »

  1. Very vivid write and I love how you took shooting star and flipped it around. Great imagery to your words too, nicely done.

    Comment by Pat Hatt | June 28, 2011 | Reply

    • Thank you, Pat! I like how you put it, ‘flipped it around’!

      Comment by alee9 | June 30, 2011 | Reply


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