jornales

for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

blizzard aftermath (edited)

blizzard aftermath—
now copper on trees
those defiant (petulant) leaves

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December 2, 2010 - Posted by | haiku, poetry | , , , , , , ,

2 Comments »

  1. An elegant use of image and construction to build a piece as formal and sculptured as classic art. Very beautiful. Well written. Gay @beachanny

    Comment by hollyheir | December 5, 2010 | Reply

    • “…as formal and sculptured as classic art” if my literature professors would read this one-sentence critique now…Thank you so much!

      Comment by alee9 | December 6, 2010 | Reply


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