for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

white sun

white sun
burning through November sky
her nth unanswered call

November 10, 2010 - Posted by | haiku, poetry | , , , , , ,


  1. what a great view of the sun
    love the way you express this

    thanks for sharing with One Shot great to have you here please feel welcome any Wednesday. We do start Tuesday eve

    Moon Smiles

    Comment by moondustwriter | November 10, 2010 | Reply

    • Thank you for welcoming me! Honestly, I signed up quite gingerly stepping into the gate excited but also apprehensive to interact with some of the great poets in the site. But it’s the only to grow or I would just keep wilting on my own.

      Comment by alee9 | November 10, 2010 | Reply

  2. Glad you stepped into the gate. Numerous unanswered calls on a unseasonably warm & sunny November day. To say I can relate to that would be an understatement. Your open attitude toward growth is good to hear.

    Comment by dustus | November 10, 2010 | Reply

    • Thanks, Dustus!

      Comment by alee9 | November 11, 2010 | Reply

  3. Striking, heart resonant work.

    Comment by Steve Isaak | November 10, 2010 | Reply

    • One sentence critique to lift the heart–Thanks, Steve!

      Comment by alee9 | November 11, 2010 | Reply

  4. nice. i think i may just shut the phone off on a beautiful day…smiles. nice one shot

    Comment by brian | November 10, 2010 | Reply

    • Hahaha… or just stop waiting for an answer! Thanks.

      Comment by alee9 | November 11, 2010 | Reply

  5. Ooh! Do you have the sun’s phone number? I’d like to give her a call and have her meet me this weekend!

    (The forecast looks cloudy!)

    Nice One Shot!

    Comment by Eric Alder | November 10, 2010 | Reply

    • The sun on your mobile phone to tell you still no answer… yes, I’ll give you the sun’s number though it’s supposed to be a secret. Thanks!

      Comment by alee9 | November 11, 2010 | Reply

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