for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

chilly morning

chilly morning–

a whiff

of fresh grilled corn

September 21, 2010 - Posted by | haiku, poetry | ,


  1. Excellent haiku. Suspenseful, with the third line being a warm reply to the first.

    Comment by Pacze Moj | October 1, 2010 | Reply

    • “Excellent” and “suspenseful”, too! It makes me think that I have finally arrived as a poet, a haiku writer! Thank you for turning on the spotlight on this moment–a moment I have singled out from the whirl of the summer just past.

      Comment by alee9 | October 1, 2010 | Reply

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