for a moment of joy or moments no one pays for, i give myself a ‘jornal’. this makes me rich. try it.

swept by the wind

swept by the wind

the ruckus of the sparrows–

double entendre

July 12, 2010 - Posted by | haiku, poetry | ,


  1. Ha! I love this. Is the wind swept by the sparrows? – or are the sparrows ruckused by the wind? And ruckus is such a good word. You truly write with a poet’s eye and ear. 🙂

    Comment by upinvermont | August 8, 2010 | Reply

    • Hahaha! Who ruckus-ed who? I think I meant it both ways. Thanks again!

      Comment by alee9 | August 8, 2010 | Reply

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